Fun with words…

So I’m editing IF YOU KNOW HER, the last book in the RS trilogy.

Came across this little bit.

He stroked his hand up her lung.

First…ewwwww.  Second…getting that right word is crucial.

It should have read:

He stroked his hand up her leg.

Much less gross.

I’m guest-blogging at Fresh Fiction today. 🙂

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