So I’m editing IF YOU KNOW HER, the last book in the RS trilogy.
Came across this little bit.
He stroked his hand up her lung.
First…ewwwww. Â Second…getting that right word is crucial.
It should have read:
He stroked his hand up her leg.
Much less gross.
I’m guest-blogging at Fresh Fiction today. 🙂
That’s funny. Even got my hubs to laugh ;). Glad you caught it.
I thought you were off there for a moment.
I guess it would depend on the genre LOL.
I can only assume the stroking occurred during an autopsy!
JenB… ewwww!!!!! LOL